P802.16 D4 Sponsor Ballot Comment Resolution Report

2001/09/13 IEEE 802.16-01/47Comment Resolution Report0000086Document under Review: P802.16/D4-2001 Ballot Number:Comment DateRoger MarksComment # 1 Comment submitted by:Comment Type Editorial Starting Page # Starting Line # SectionMake editorial changes as recommended by IEEE staff Project Editor:MEMOTO: Balloting CenterFROM: Jennifer LongmanDATE: 21 August 2001RE: Editorial Coordination of IEEE P802.16/ D4Upon review of IEEE P802.16/ D4, I have the following comments:1. For consistency in all IEEE 802 Standards, the name of document should read as follows:Draft Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks---Part 16:Standard Air Interface for Fixed Broadband Wireless Access Systems2. Review the use of shall/should/may/can/will/must throughout the document to be sure they are used in accordance with IEEE's style.3. Most of the information in subclause 1.3 is a repeat of information that is standard boilerplate in all IEEE 802 standards. Please review thefront matter of other IEEE 802 standards in order to determine whether this information should be removed. Is it necessary for theimplementation of the standard? If not, it should not be included in the normative portion of the standard.4. Would you like users of this standard to refer to the most recent version of the standards in Clause 2? If yes, the statement preceding thelists of references must read, "This standard shall be used in conjunction with the following publications. When the ...