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P802.3ae Draft 4.0 CommentsCl SC P L Cl SC P L00 # 148 00 # 324Booth, Brad Intel Maus, Kyle AITGComment Type E Comment Status A Comment Type E Comment Status RAs per recommendation of IEEE editor: equation numbering should include clause number. For Throughout the document there are instances of the phrase "collision detect signal." The phrase example, in Clause 44, equation (1) should be (44-1). "collision detect" should be hyphenated, as it is an adjectival phrase modifying the noun "signal."SuggestedRemedy SuggestedRemedyFix.Response Response Status C Response Response Status CACCEPT. REJECT. Cl 00 SC P L # This terminology has been used in 802.3 for many years and has become the accepted 328terminology.Maus, Kyle AITGCl 00 SC P L #Comment Type E Comment Status R 147Booth, Brad IntelThroughout the document there are instances of the phrase "network management functions." The phrase "network management" should be hyphenated, as it is an adjectival phrase Comment Type E Comment Status Amodifying the noun "functions."As per recommendation of IEEE editor: footnotes in tables should be lowercase letters, not SuggestedRemedy numbers.Put a hyphen between "network" and "management." SuggestedRemedyResponse Response Status C Change.REJECT. Response Response Status CACCEPT. This terminology has been used in 802.3 for many years and has become the accepted terminology.Cl 00 SC P L # 49000Cl 00 SC P L # 327 Pat ThalerMaus, Kyle AITGComment Type ...
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