IEEE 802.16.1 Comment Resolutions at Session #11

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TOC5 61 1 Section Wang Stanley EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Change "Sub-layer" to "Sublayer" and similar incidences throughout the In the document, "Sub-layer" is used in some places and "Sublayer" is used in
document (e.g., page 7, line 12). others. Make them consistent.
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Action: Comment 371 must be completed prior to any other comment resolutions being integrated in the document.Notes:
1.316 10 2 Section Quilez Vicente EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
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To supress from the text the suffix ".1" to "802.16", as well as from the figure To maintain coherence with the generic protocol relationship intended to be shown
title.˛ To include the text "[1,3..]" in the figure for remarking the distinct possible with the figure.
flavors of Physical 802.16 layer.
RejectRecomendation:
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Defer first part pending decision on PAR renumbering. Reject second part for consistency (PHYs of other 802 standards are not numbered in the Reason:
figure.]
Revisit following PAR number revisions.Notes:
1.3Section17 3 3 Quilez Vicente EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
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To include in the standards enummeration the following ones:˛ - ANSI/IEEE Std To complete the list of the all technologies appearing in the figure 1 on page 16.
802.5˛ - ANSI/IEEE Std 802.6
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Must find full citation.Notes:
3Section19 35 4 Karvelas Antonis TechnicalPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
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You must add the downstream in the definition of the burst profile. Add the word The term "burst profile" is used not only for upstream but also for downstream.
downstream in the sentence "Set of parameters that describe the upstream
transmission..". The correct is "Set of parameters that describe the upstream and
downstream transmis
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change "and" for "or" in recommended wording.Prop. Resolution:
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26 January 2001 Page 1 of 71319 35 5 Section Quilez Vicente EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
To delete "upstream" from the sentence "Burst Profile: Set of parameters that The definition of Burst Profile is generic to bith upstream and downstream.
describe upstream transmission properties.."
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see comment 4.Notes:
3 Definitions19 41 6 Section Stanwood Kenneth TechnicalPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
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See IEEE 802.16.1c-01/04r0 for description of changes for packing multiple See IEEE 802.16.1c-01/04r0 for explanation of need for packing multiple SDUs
SDUs into a single PDU in presence of fragmentation and of higher layer into a single PDU in presence of fragmentation and of higher layer protocol type.
protocol type.
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Ken will provide changes to the above mentioned document that will also require inclusion for this edit.Prop. Resolution:
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3.1119 64 7 Section Wang Stanley EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Change "a SS" to "an SS" and all similar incidences throughout the document Grammatical error.
(e.g., page 20, line 14).
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3.1820 23 8 Section Hum Coleman EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
move Section 3.18 before 3.15 Alphabetical ordering
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also move 3.19 to meet alphabetical ordering.Prop. Resolution:
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3.19Section20 26 9 Hum Coleman EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
move Section 3.19 before 3.15 Alphabetical ordering
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Reason:
see comment 8.Notes:
26 January 2001 Page 2 of 713.2220 38 10 Section Wang Stanley Technical, BindingPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Add the following definition after "Management Connection":˛ "Message MIC is a very important part of the registration process and should have been
Integrity Check (MIC): A digest which ensures that the data sent from the defined.
provisioning server were not modified en route.
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3.2220 39 11 Section Quilez Vicente Technical, BindingPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
To clarify whether the mini-slot concept is also valid for the downstream in the Along the current standard content is not clear whether the mini-slot concept is
mini-slot defintion included in section 3. applicable for the downstream subframe.
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at the beginning of the definition, insert the word "uplink" in front of the word "bandwidth."Prop. Resolution:
Reason:
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3.2420 44 12 Section Johnson Robert TechnicalPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Add the following definitions:˛ "Payload Header Suppression (PHS): The process These definitions are used in support of IEEE 802.16.1c-01/02, a proposed
of suppressing the repetitive portion of payload headers at the sender and specification for Convergence Sublayer supporting variable-length, packet-based
restoring the headers at the receiver."˛ "Payload Header Suppression Field high-layer protocols. Note that the definition for PDU is per ISO/IEC 7498
(PHSF): A string of bytes re standard.
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3.24Section20 44 13 Wang Stanley TechnicalPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Add the following definition:˛ "Payload Header Suppression (PHS): The process This definition is used in support of IEEE 802.16.1c-01/01, a proposed
of suppressing the repetitive portion of payload headers at the sender and specification for ATM Convergence Sublayer.
restoring the headers at the receiver."
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26 January 2001 Page 3 of 713.2620 52 14 Section Wang Stanley Technical, BindingPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Add the following definition:˛ Protocol Data Unit (PDU): A data unit generated Per ISO /IEC 7498-1:1994, the term "PDU" and "SDU" are clearly defined and
by a particular protocol layer for its next lower layer. should be followed in this draft standard to avoid unnecessary confusion. For
example, CS PDU means the data unit generate and handed by the CS layer to the
MAC layer.˛ The followin
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3.2620 53 15 Section Wang Stanley Technical, BindingPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Add the following definition after the definition for "Privacy Key Mamagement Ranging is an important step of the entire process and should have been defined.
Protocol":˛ "Ranging: The process of acquiring the correct timing offset such that
the subscriber stations are aligned to a symbol that marks the begining of a mini-
slot boundary
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Ranging is sufficiently defined in the section on ranging.Reason:
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320 62 16 Section Quilez Vicente EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
To align the defined term and the corresponding definition. Attending to the given definition, the term defined is the MAC Service Access
Point. If the aim is to define the term Service Access Point, any reference to MAC
layer should be deleted from the definition. If the aim is to define The MAC
Service Access Po
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see comment 17Notes:
3.2820 62 17 Section Wang Stanley Technical, BindingPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Change the definition for "Service Access Point" to read:˛ "Service Access Point SAP is a general term for all protocol layers not just the MAC layer. The original
(SAP): The point in a protocol stack where the services of a lower layer are definition suggests otherwise.
available to its next higher layer."
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26 January 2001 Page 4 of 713.2921 1 18 Section Johnson Robert Technical, BindingPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reason: Resolution:
Add the following definition:˛ "Service Data Unit (SDU): A data unit handed to a This definition is used in support of IEEE 802.16.1c-01/02, a proposed
particular protocol layer from the layer above it." specification for Convergence Sublayer supporting variable-length, packet-based
high-layer protocols. Note that the definition for SDU is per ISO/IEC 7498
standard.
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3.2921 1 19 Section Wang Stanley EditorialPage/Line: / Number Name: Type:
ResolvedChange: Reas